rain

• Artist: darksangel34
• Description: i wrote dis when i was really REALLY lovesick...and heartbroken...so please give fairly goood ratings!!!!!
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: rain

Rain
falls like
Sleet
cold and hard
at first.
Gray and clear
like falling icycles
from the last
winter's fall
Pale
Blue
Alone
tears
you left me
Alone
Rain, now so cold and so warm
i see you
but i chose not
to look you in the eye
and smile
because my tears
cloud my eyes
with a merky slush.
i'm not pleading
not retreating
my feelings
so goodbye
forever into
the darkness
i lie
and wait...


for you
emo

Comments

[xxunbreakable7xx]

words can't explain my thoughts!...i'm left breathless. you have the true qualities of a real poet!
*my cousin is da bomb diggety! so be jealous!!*
there, i think i made my point! smile

[Deadlylight6]

thanks for liking mine so much! honestly i have no idea wat to say but this is incredible work! was wondering if ud b my friend and we can share our thoughts?

[p_chan_pig_pig]

o.o? i think i've rated this b4
hmm..

[p_chan_pig_pig]

:'( its really good 5/5!

[Xx_Making-Time_xX]

This i could tell was from the heart, it's real good. 5/5

[x Solo Lobo x]

its really good. i feel the same way right now. i cant read this again for a while because its makes me think of all the pain i am feeling right now. 5/5

[Demonio69]

I rember you telling me rain hides the tears...Rain can hide many things but it cant hide a broken heart, no matter how many times you are left alone, there will be someone, some where out there for you.