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Red tears
Dripping wet down her face
red and thick she looks to grace
thinking, hoping for a sign
that tells her its almost time
Dripping wet from her eyes
they say red tears r all just lies
begging, pleading she can not see
its almost time shes almost free
Dripping wet into her ear
they're almost gone all her fears
screaming, choking from her pain
they look at her like shes insane
Dripping wet onto the ground
she can not hear..not a single sound
as her life slips away
they all just look..then they say
"red tears...thats all a lie"
"but bloody tears....." then she died

- Title: Red tears
- Artist: Momichi17
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im new here so i kno as much as a new born......o and plz dont take mi poems i work really hard on them and their really important to me
and the picture i used belongs to a very artistic person - Date: 09/25/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Doomed konvict - 03/14/2009
- nice 5/5
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- II hyuuga II - 02/17/2009
- very nice sad yet understanding
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- Alibis of the Heart - 01/05/2009
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I like it a lot^^ You've got potential to be great!
If you don't mind, could you please check out some of my stuff? Thanks smile - Report As Spam
- DoomedLuv1 - 01/01/2009
- O WOW THATS GOOD!!!!!!!!
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- BrassKnuckleBaby - 10/01/2008
- amazing. congrats! good luck on gaia!
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- xxHiro - 10/01/2008
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OMG!!!!
This is one of your BESTTTTT freaking poems ever! fhgdwfdfdfds
I love it!!! For real, keep it up i'm waiting for one of your happy poems now though.
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- 7Haseo - I AM MARCUS - 09/30/2008
- that was great nicely done sis
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