Unholy Matrimony

• Artist: TearsofBlood
• Description: I will love you till death do us part.
• Date: 07/26/2008
• Tags: matrimony love death marriage

Dear my love
Didn’t you want to be with me?
I waited so long for this day
When our vows would be declared
And the world would see
That we can make it
That we can be free

You were so beautiful
In your dress of white
Like a field of lilies
Sewn together, just for you
And my darkened world
Light up by your smile

So my dear
Confess to me
Why didn’t you say
That you would go away?

You’d never shed a tear
Did you think I wouldn’t care?

On that day
Your heart had failed you
I had failed you too
I couldn’t protect you
From what may kill you

My sweet Clementine
Where are you now?
I cannot hear your screams
As you lay silent before me

The fires flare up around you
They singe your hair
And blacken your dress
Your beautiful white dress

My blushing bride
I could not save you
But wait for me
So that we may say
“I do”

Comments

[DeathIsTheSweetestBliss]

amazing description! 5 for sure!

[kkkthnksbye]

that poem is unique ! 5
plz vote me back

[flutteringeyelashes]

Very interesting. Different from alotta what I've seen so far (admittably, I just started looking through the arenas, but whatever) and I like the story. Tragically romantic, which is something I've always loved. But not Romeo and Juliet. That one was just weird.

[twilightluv666]

i absolutely loved the story line and how it was easy to understand!
i think Clementine is a commonly used name for poems, though. but it definately fit your composition!
if you ever revise this i think you should add a small description of the man? like what he was wearing. i'm not sure but you could give it a try.
other than that, keep up the good work!

[Ornias 23]

that is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!
romantic!!!!!

[Grievous Bodily Harm]

That's good keep it up! ^_^

[Cuppiecake Monster]

Wow, that story was really intense.I liked it.