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She was in her room, standing near the window, watching the full moon make the darkened sky beautiful. Her cream pale skin reflected it's light makinh her beauty tie with the moons, yet her eyes were dull, as though she was waiting for something she knew would never come. But as soon as she turned her head aways from the window her eyes came to life.
There in front of her a man, he had long midnight black hair that draped his shoulders and frame his face perfectly. His ivory skinned shine in the moon light that came from the window, also making his emerald eyes glow. She couldn't speak, she felt as thought she got caught in his eyes, like a fly caught by a spiders web.
He noticed this and smiled a devils smile, stroking her hair back so non was on her shoulders or in her face. This made her heart beat loudly and her body freeze. She knew what this beautiful creature wanted but she never allowed to give it to him, appearantly he finally lost his patience and now put her under his suductive spell.
it worked, she didn't know how but he did it, her body was screaming for him. Her heart told him he has accomplished his plan. So he slipped his finger under her chen and slipped his other hand around her back to support her. He gently tilted her head back, exposing her pale neck, and rest his pale lips on her throat. He could already taste it, her blood, her viens, he could feel her warm blood flow through as her heart raced. Sweet was the first word that appeared in his thirsty mind. her sweet blood, and he was now able to sink his sharp canines in her soft throat.
She gasp for a second and then her cheeks flushed at the sensation, his fangs in her throat and his tongue licking the blood as he ate. His suductive mind made her numb, but at the same time, made her feel total bliss, there ws no pain, she just wanted more.
He felt the same, her blood was sweet, it made his body tingle. Her whole body kept pulsing, which he felt each second. Also hearing her moans made him go mad, he couldn't control his raging thirst for her any longer. No vampire thought they would feel heaven, but he did this moment, sweet heaven.
She was seduction to him.....she truelly had a vampire under her spell, she had "Seductive Blood"...
- by SexyNeko13 |
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- | Submitted on 01/06/2010 |
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- Title: Seductive blood
- Artist: SexyNeko13
- Description: I'm just a pervert...don't judge! xD
- Date: 01/06/2010
- Tags: seductive love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- gum-bubble-gum741 - 03/21/2011
- i wish u could continue that..... biggrin
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- popsinger102 - 06/07/2010
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I agree with brownie
Make it more unique
It is interesting and good
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- brownie asplosion - 01/17/2010
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its an interesting start. watch for typos. those make it hard to read a story. the plot itself is hackneyed. overused. dull. everyone loves vampires and the occult, but you have to make the story more unique for it to be interesting
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- raeflower - 01/09/2010
- I didn't see Twilight at all... Some people just see "Vampire" and assume "Twilight" I thought it was great, although there were a couple of things that might be in need of rephrasing, and there were a few typos. I'm sorry, I'm a stickler for typos and phrasing, so I have to say 3/5. It has nothing to do with the story line, I promise.
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- SexyNeko13 - 01/07/2010
- o.o???????? this came out of my freaking head!!!! How's this close to twilight! Edward to much of a freaking daisy to do this!!!
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- Yaymeimashi - 01/07/2010
- Stop reading Twilight and come up with your own ideas.
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