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Leaning against the car with her umbrella over her head, she waits for
her brother to get out of school. Her phone buzzes and she flips it open to see a
text from that brother himself saying he's going home with someone with a name
she doesn't recognize. What a waste of time waiting for him. She pulls her car
keys from her back pocket and walks around to the drivers side and gets in. She
starts the car, puts it in drive and starts to pull out of the space only to be stopped
by foolish high schoolers walking behind moving cars. She knows she had more
sense than that when she went to the school. Oh well. As she waits for the crowd
to pass she turns on the radio and puts it on her favorite station, only to look up
to see a boy in front of her car just watching her. She throws them an odd look
and drives away seeing as the crowd finally cleared. As she drove, however, she
couldn't help but notice in her rear view mirror that the boy was still just standing
there watching her drive away. She pushed it to the back of her mind and focused
on getting to where she was going. Why should she worry about some random
odd boy?
- by Lady Kagas Rin |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/02/2009 |
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- Title: The Beginning of a Story
- Artist: Lady Kagas Rin
- Description: This is the beginning of my new story. Please tell me if I should keep going or not.
- Date: 12/02/2009
- Tags: beginning story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- FlamingoObsession - 11/18/2011
- wow, this really leaves me wanting more. haha. It seems like the beginning of a really awesome story. This is just a suggestion but in the b eginning you could add her name like : leaning against the car with her umbrella over her head, (her name) waits for her brother to get out of school. Just a suggestion! you don't have to. its great how it is biggrin
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- Lady Kagas Rin - 12/07/2009
- Thank you. I will continue when I have free time over the break. Be looking for more around Christmas!
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- Vampiressofweird - 12/07/2009
- yes go on!!!!
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