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My name is Nami Lynn Cullen.
I go to Nightwing High School.
During my summer vaction..i was sent to a camp called
Camp HikeFord.
Which to me is a very dumb name..but anyway
my parents sent me here to get some "Fresh air"
If they call lumpy beds,early sleep,horrid dinners and rude people..
They can keep their great out doors.
As I arrived into camp i mumble how life for me will go down hill.
"I know you didnt want to do this honey,but think of this as..a vaction from the
noisy town we call home."
"It's not like i had a choice to come here anyway." I mumbled.
"Mom..why couldnt i just stay home where at least i can be with people i do know.Not at some boring old camp."
"You never know hon. You might even make new friends.Besides i came here when i was your age.You'll be fine."
"What if i dont fit in?"
"Dont worry.You'll be alright."
With that we pulled onto the dirt road,i said my goodbyes,grab my bookpack
and went foward to the worst summer ever.
- by Midnight-Halloween-Angel |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: Cabin666
- Artist: Midnight-Halloween-Angel
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Sorry its bad.
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and if something needs to be change
please dont say it rudely. - Date: 12/03/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Midorikirin - 11/17/2009
- I think it needs more describing words, pull us into the story!
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- Bragi Wilhelm - 12/09/2008
- Frankly, this is a bit sub par. It seems to be nothing but dialogue. You could stand to put some descriptors in, explain the place and time in which this is happening. I honestly didn't know they were in a car until the last sentence. The dialogue is well written, and flows naturally, but you could work on everything else, honestly.
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- Kitty Pandas - 12/07/2008
- what a cute spelling style! I like it =)
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