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The bullet through the world
Left ashes for us to see
To smell each and everyday
Every kid thinking “It was probably for me…â€
Like god himself
Had pulled the trigger
Or an angel screaming
When the hole got bigger
A chilling breeze
Swept down our spines
As we watched the liars
Whisper to them “I’m fine.â€
It’s almost as if
Everyone’s given up
And the lord himself
Found arguing rough
And it’s almost as if
Watching a disease spread
And each time you blink
You just never know—
Your best friend could be dead.
- by XxcarlehhxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Behind Your Shoulder
- Artist: XxcarlehhxX
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pretty depressing >.< - Date: 06/16/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- crying penguin - 10/21/2009
- Wow I love it! 5.1/5
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- polarice264 - 09/07/2009
- cool. like the hair. i am thinking of changing mine like urs. wink
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- James Torque - 08/10/2009
- Interesting. Very different from the poetry that I am used to reading. Thank you for posting.
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- Missy_J1 - 07/20/2009
- nice 5/5
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- Raixa_Phantasy - 07/14/2009
- wow.... you could turn this into a short story. Just a suggestion
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- Fayne Darkness - 07/11/2009
- It's quite lovely, short, but still lovely poem biggrin 5/5 I loved it
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- Twisted Starlight - 07/09/2009
- T-T thats deep....5/5
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