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Part 5
The Robotman awakens..
Awakening with a startle, armor coated with sweat,
His eyes take in the setting and begin to reset.
Rising to mechanical legs never before seen,
Rushing to the end of the cave, muscles lax and lean.
The sun reflects his coiling motors and features,
The terrain warped and changed by these terrible creatures.
“My journey begins here,” His words a whisper,
The lines of reality combine and thoughts stop to occur.
His ambition to the wind and eyes to the sky,
Feet set in motion and dirt below doth complies.
The ocean gives way to demons and fair shores,
His motions and actions are written in future lore.
The city ahead burns, no republic or jury,
Rain falls down in heavy gash and never ending flurry.
“Here begins the robot beginning of the robot end,”
He begins to sprint, at the tail of the bend.
Will he die or succeed? Does the success rate obtain?
Circuits fall from his brains and his last thoughts remain.
- by The Dashing Gentleman |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Title: The Robotman Epic: Part 5
- Artist: The Dashing Gentleman
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Description:
The Robotman awakens from his startling dream, only to see a world that very much mirrors the horrors he faced within his mind...
(This is not a poem, no matter how much people believe it is. It is an epic, and it just so happens to rhyme..;)...Just kidding.
It's an epic poem..) - Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: robotman epic part
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Random guy 1025 - 08/22/2009
- Dude, u should have opened it for voting, i would have given it a 5/5, so would have a lot of people.
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- avialaePrincess - 08/20/2009
- this i must say is brilliant, super uber, and (as my friends say) totally EPIC
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/31/2009
- reminds me of The ultimo manga.
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- Iudicious - 07/14/2009
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Interesting. It's unique, and I love how you combined human aspects with robotic ones. I'm not sure if this was intentional or part of the story (I'm only seeing part five here, I apologize!)
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- IamVainHuareu - 04/23/2009
- nice writing. but the title is kinda cheezy. Robotman.
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