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I never gave up …
On a stormy day when I was waiting for my girlfriend Anya .
I waited for 3 hours on her ,I was so excited to see her because today was going to be a special day.
I had a gift but not a normal gift a gift she would never forget ( a beautiful diamond ring ).
I waited and waited hoping she would come to me but after 4 hours I gave up ,I went home …
My mother asked where I had been all that time I answered that I was waiting for Anya but that she didn’t show up.
The day after I text messaged her … no response and normally I get a response in 3 minutes but nothing ,nothing at all.
Days ,weeks went by then suddenly we get a phone at home my mom was breathless ,suddenly she starts crying and hands me the phone…An officer on the phone …
he told me that they found Anya lying in a bush in the park ,in coma I couldn’t hold my temper I started to cry the officer hung up.
I went to the hospital to see her … there she was lying in a bed ,hardly breathing then suddenly a doctor comes to me and explains what they found out …I was speechless ,he said that she got raped and then got hit down in coma that she only had a 5% to get out of it … no I couldn’t believe my baby girl was in a coma.
I went home walking ,crying and angry at the same time ,I was thinking of the moments with her , Anya so beautiful yet so shy , I thought about the time we first met …
I went to my first day in high school and walked in the hallway suddenly I bumped onto her and her papers fell , I wanted to bend over to get them for her but she was going to do the same thing too so we bumped our heads together ,she fell down again I helped her up and said I’m really sorry and she was a little dizzy so I took her too the nurse and we had a long talk there because we had to wait long before the nurse came and we became friends ,but not long after I started to get feelings for her and on a sweet ,hot summer day I asked her if she felt the same and she said yes , from then on we were a couple.
We were happy for so long .. until this happened … I couldn’t even sleep ,eat and even talk … until 1 day I realised that there was still that 5% .
I had found hope again I could sleep again ,eat again until the cops called and they said that they found the guy who did it : JACK !!!!
I couldn’t believe my ears !!! sorry if you cant follow I’ll fill you guys in jack was my best friend on high school until I had more friends our paths split … he was even in love with Anya but she wasn’t in love with him that’s why we split up . when I heard this I was full of anger never thought he would do something like that …
I started to work out ,build some muscles after a few months the cops still didn’t found him but I knew where he was , his secret hideout well actually ours because we build it together but after we split up he decided to have the hideout I was ok with it because I had Anya and I didn’t need nothing else …
I went to search for him there , I found him there , he was surprised I found him …
But I wasn’t , I was full of anger I shouted at him : why did you raped and hit her in a coma … He answered : if i cant have her nobody can . I was so angry and shouted : why you !!!!!
I charged suddenly he pulled out a knife I wasn’t prepared for that … He cut me in my chest he laughed : is that all you got !!!
I charged again avoiding the knife .. I had him and he knew it . I hit him until my fists were bleeding ,I stopped and ran ,ran far away back to the hospital and went to Anya’s room…
I opened the door ,picked up a towel and started clearing my fists up , I went to sit next to her bed … I silently whispered in her ear : I got him for you Anya please wake up I need you here with me .
Suddenly I felt her hand moving … I called the doctors , I stayed . the doctors were saying that she was waking up from her coma … I was even happier I knew she was gonna be alright ….
But no there always has to happen something to me and her . the doctors were discussing , then suddenly 1 of them came to me and said to me : I’m sorry kido your girlfriend has lost her memory she doesn’t remember anything or anyone …
No I couldn’t believe them I ran to her and asked : Anya do you recognise me ?
She looked at me and asked : I’m sorry do I know you?
I hugged her and said : its me baby its john
I started crying but was happy at the same time.
I started to build up my friendship with her again but still feeling that crush on her and wishing she would one day remember it … two months later we were walking and she bumps onto a pole I rush to her and break her fall then suddenly she opens her eyes and says : john ?! ooohhh john …. I was so happy ,so glad she remembered me …
Baby I thought you would never remember me …. I told her everything and then she started to cry ... I didn’t care if it took so long I was just happy that she was alright again …
The ring !!!! I still had it , I took her with me and gave it to her and at the same time asked if she wanted to marry me … She said : Of course stupid …
We got married and forgot about the past and thought about the future .
- by i_partiiboy |
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- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: never give up on someone
- Artist: i_partiiboy
- Description: this is a romance story with a lovely ending
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: never give someone
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Magic-bam - 12/30/2008
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man when I got your pm i thought it was just gonna be a stupid little story
Man this...this touched me ... - Report As Spam
- bloodred_rose_vampyre - 12/28/2008
- good job. It was awesome you're a good writer. It's sweet and makes me kind of sad but those are my issues. anyways good job xd
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- Milkshakebaby13 - 12/26/2008
- that was sooo sweet i could just cry ur the tipe of guy that any gurl would want .dont ever looz her
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- Rawr_Nickasaur - 12/26/2008
- thia is a cool and touching story
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- Kao_705_hearts - 12/26/2008
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very clique...and sweet...though at moments it was predictable...spelling you should work on, but hey english isn't my best subject. I thought it was good. But um...try making the story flow better add some new info and maybe replace some scenes.
3/5 whee - Report As Spam
- i_partiiboy - 12/26/2008
- k i will =P
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- Rainbeau Essence - 12/26/2008
- i think you should definitely write more and pursue your dreams, but i notice lots of places where the story doesn't flow well. go ahead and send me a PM if you want me to elaborate, k? ^_^
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